Crime Screenwriting
Crime Screenwriting First of all, action scenes are all about movement . Try to imagine yourself in the fight. When your fists are flying and you’re trying not to get punched, you’re not going to stand still and admire the room around you. In the fight — even if it’s third person — the reader should only see the perspective of the involved. The only thing your character should focus on is the task at hand. If they feel emotion, it’s all in their gut and instincts. This would be a simplistic example: Like a discarded toy, I was shoved down on the floor, and I lifted my half-lidded eyes to see him sneering victoriously down at me. In that moment, I could feel nothing but hatred for him, and a gripping desire to do something about it. I wanted to fight, to kill — I no longer cared if it killed me. And so I staggered to my feet. My legs were shaking, but I leapt instantly into the fray. My fists pummeled any inch of skin I could find; the throbbing in my head only a...