Editing Screenplay
Editing
Screenplay
I see a lot of people
claiming that typos, formatting mistakes, etc shouldn't be held against a
script and that what matters is the story. And that's true. But...
While I agree that a
great script is not made any less great by an abundance of typos, spelling
mistakes or formatting issues, the fact of the matter is that these things
usually aren't there in good scripts in the first place. This is because
writing a good script takes dozens of drafts, polishes, rewrites and hundreds
of reads, re-reads and re-re-reads as you go along until it finally gets to the
point where it's market ready. During that process, most typos and formatting
issues get naturally spotted and fixed, even if you're not actively looking for
them. Of course a couple might slip through, but the vast majority are caught
during those many (many, many, many) re-reads that are natural to the process
of writing a draft that's ready for sharing.
When I see a script
averaging 2 typos per page, it's eye-rollingly clear that the writer wrote the
script in a week or two, proofread it twice and thought they were done. Unless
you're a genius, you can't write a decent script like that. It takes time. It
takes effort. The current WGA minimum for a feature-length screenplay is almost
100 grand. Do you really think it takes two weeks to do something good enough
that companies will pay you 100 grand for it?
So it's not that typos
make your script worse so much as they are an indication that your
script probably wouldn't be much good even without typos, because one of the
unintended byproducts of putting in the work necessary to make your story good
is that you catch and fix non-story issues in your document.
At the beginning
of any writing project is the agonizing period in which nebulous ideas dance before the mind’s eye like memories of a dream,
and vaporous vague shapes take on human form and begin to answer to their names. Trying to will a
world into existence. I circle around it, nibbling at the edges, writing notes
about the social infrastructure and expounding to no one in particular about
the themes of the thing. Then slowly a change happens. Without warning, it
becomes easier to write a scene than to write notes about the scene. I start
sticking words in the mouths of characters who are still mannequins, forcing
them to move and to walk. Slowly their movements become more human. The curve
inflects upward, the pace increases. The characters begin to say things in their own words… Any
scene that I couldn’t crack right away, I skimmed over and used the novelistic
treatment form to sort of mumble through. What you have is at once a kind of pathetic document; it is
as long as a script, but messy and undisciplined, full of cheats and
glossed-over sections. But it is also an interesting snapshot of formatting a
moment in the creative process… The value of [the scriptment] lies solely in it
being presented unchanged, unedited, unpolished. It is the first hurling of paint
against the wall…”
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