How to Write Short Films and Start Your Career
How to Write Short Films and Start Your Career [W/ Short Film Outline]
Want to learn about writing short films? We have all the answers
for you.
Chances are you’re
reading No Film School because you’re not only obsessed with Hollywood, but you
want to be a part of it. But breaking in is never easy. That’s why I think
writing short films and even making them yourself, has become a viable option
for breaking into the business.
Of course, writing
a short film is no simple task, but today I’ll take you through a few great
strategies to get your short film ideas on the page, and then hopefully on the
screen.
Let’s get going!
But let’s get this
out of the way first…
How Long Is a Short
Film?
A short film is any
film that isn't long enough to be considered a feature. The Sundance Film Festival allows its shorts
to be 50 minutes or less. The Academy Awards sets the bar at 40
minutes. Technically this is what qualifies as a short film.
Don’t get too
caught up in thinking about these varying lengths. Focus on what you want to do
with your short, the world, the characters, the situation, and see where you
land.
One of my favorite
shorts of all time clocks in at 26 minutes. It’s called Six
Shooter, and was directed by Martin McDonagh.
But writing 26
pages can feel like a daunting task.
If you’re just
starting out, I’d recommend trying to see what you can achieve in five pages. I
know what you’re thinking, “5 pages, that’s easy!” Head over to Channel
101 for a look at a handful of stories crafted in the 5-minute
span. Channel 101 is a way filmmakers cut their teeth writing short films, and
developing short film ideas. It's where popular animated show Rick and Morty began.
How to Write a
Short Film that Connects
But writing short
films that actually connect with an audience and receives acclaim is hard.
Short film comedy is a common route, and you can search top short films on
youtube to see what people are connecting with currently.
When you consider
it, isn't an Instagram story a short film? Certainly, a skit is. Short films
surround you. Which ones do you connect most with?
Start with five
pages and then expand. If you expand too much, your idea may not even be right
for a short film.
Here’s another one
of my favorite short films that spans 60 years and is less than three minutes
long.
When you’re writing
a short film, there are lots of options about length.
How will you know
if you’ve got the right short film ideas?
How to Brainstorm
Writing Short Film Ideas!
Short films are
kind of a tricky path to follow. When we sit down to write, the natural
inclination is to set up a huge story with a lot of characters, and great
stakes, but that’s not really what short films are about.
A short film needs
to take us on an emotional journey, but we should never feel like the story is
crammed into the allotted time.
The short film has
to be able to stand alone.
In my opinion, the
best short films take us on a fulfilling journey, that often happens
"in the moment" so to speak.
That means, the
story might play out in real time, or close to real time. When I’m sitting down
to write a short film, I think about situations or moments that can tell a
grander lesson but occur in real time.
What are some
scenarios from my own life? What are some events that happened to me that
taught me lessons applicable to writing short films?
Did I ever spend an
afternoon with a grandparent? Help someone change flat tire? I know I’ve been
on a ton of bad Tinder dates.
This great short is
about the anxiety of giving a school presentation.
Chase your own life
around for a bit. Do some self-reflection.
I like to mine my
own life, and then add fantastical elements to the mix. Build your story out,
accentuate the characters, find the crucial moments where we learn something.
And let the idea
take you where you want to go.
When I’m writing a
short film I also like to think about limitations. Can I tell a story that
takes place entirely in the back seat of a car?
One that’s just
about a game of hide and seek?
Some of the
Best Short Films are Pixar Short Films
Pixar is known for
it's well-crafted features, but to unlock some of their storytelling secrets,
look no farther than the shorts that lead off the Pixar film experience.
Take this short
film, Piper, by Pixar Animation.
This short film
takes place almost in real time. It has a simple quest, for a baby bird to get
a shell. It’s a SIMPLE goal, but it’s still an enthralling watch.
It’s a simple
story, but it gets the audience’s attention right away. We’re emotionally
hooked to this baby bird, and along for the ride.
If you want to
think about humans, take the lessons learned in Pixar’s Bao.
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This is only three
minutes long, but it shines a light on familial love the same way Pixar’s
feature-length films do. Just on a smaller scale.
Again, these movies
are all personal stories. We can identify with the characters in the moment,
and we have a clear beginning, middle, and end.
No narrative cram!
Pixar short films aren't just helpful at understanding how to write short
films, they're a low-key storytelling masterclass.
It’s my opinion
that the best short films tell a story that’s solely about one experience. I
think many short films suffer from trying to do too much, or set up too big of
a world.
There are tons of
other great short films online too. Just look for them and figure out what's
working for you, and what isn't.
Once I have a short
film idea I like, I like to use this simple tool to see if my idea works
Short Film Idea
Outline
We use feature film
outlines to plan out our stories, so how can we use a similar outline to plan
out our short film ideas?
When I sit to write
a short film, I always shoot for around twelve pages. I like to write in
increments of four pages for each act, and then trim or expand as I flesh out
the idea.
Sometimes this
leads me to a feature film…or a TV show…or anything but a short film...
But it’s a great
way to get my idea going and to expand my own understanding of the story.
Here’s a simple
short film outline I use to get my stuff going….
1. What’s the opening
scene?
2. Who’s out character
and what do they want?
3. Who populates their
world?
4. What immediately
stands in their way?
5. Where are we on
page three?
6. What else makes it
hard?
7. Where are we on
page five?
8. What changes in our
character’s mood or outlook?
9. Where are we on
page seven?
10.
What’s the worst thing that happens?
11.
How do they react to the worst thing?
12.
Where are we on page ten?
13.
Can the worst be fixed? How?
14.
Where are we on page 12?
15.
Where do we leave our characters?
These fifteen
prompts get my mind moving. They force me to always create obstacles, introduce
characters, and keep things going.
So let’s break down
a short film using it!
The Last Farm,
directed by Rúnar Rúnarsson. It's 17
minutes long, so this all won't be EXACT, but let’s try it anyway.
1. What’s the
opening scene?
The farm doing
chores, getting his farm ready for what we presume is winter.
2. Who’s out
character and what do they want?
Our farmer wants
him and his wife to stay in the house. His kids want them to move out.
3. Who populates
their world?
They live in
isolation but seem happy.
4. What immediately
stands in their way?
Their kids want to
put them in a home.
5. Where are we on
page three?
Three to five
minutes in, we know the world, the stakes, and see both sides of the argument.
6. What else makes
it hard?
The conditions on
the farm, the kids, the neighboring food delivery guy.
7. Where are we on
page five?
We know this guy is
proud and doesn’t want help. We know he’s stubborn. So we can feel the
existential dread of confrontation coming our way.
8. What changes in
our character’s mood or outlook?
He’s reconciled
that this is a losing battle, but still works tirelessly to prove he can live
here.
9. Where are we on
page seven?
Life has gotten
terrible, we know he’s digging a grave, and we can feel the heat as his family
careens toward him. Tension!
10. What’s the
worst thing that happens?
His wife is dead!
He’s going to be alone in the old folks home without her.
11. How do they
react to the worst thing?
He’s going to bury
her at their home, but we get the sense that he HAS TO do it before his family
arrives.
12. Where are we on
page ten?
We’re biting our
nails as he gets her funeral ready, and the car comes toward him.
13. Can the worst
be fixed? How?
He can’t make her
alive again, but he can bury her there.
14. Where are we on
page 12?
He has her coffin
in the ground, and we see him saying a prayer and saying goodbye to the idyllic
home.
AND THEN HE GETS IN
THE GRAVE!!!!
15. Where do we
leave our characters?
As the car pulls
up, we leave our man buried underground with his wife. We don’t know if they’ll
be dug up or what, but we do know that his wish of spending his life with his
wife has been fulfilled.
That was super
powerful. And I know it can feel daunting to write after watching that
masterpiece.
Still, grab that
checklist and let’s brainstorm some of your short film ideas!
More Short Film
Idea Brainstorming
If you’re trying to
make something compelling in 5-20 minutes, I find it’s easier to brainstorm an
event that only takes that long to unfold, and then dials in the consequences.
One thing I like
about this short film, called Election Night, is that it shrinks
its story down to cover the final ten minutes before the polls close, while
still crafting compelling characters and giving us a full story.
While this short
film doesn’t happen in real time, it still exudes the frenetic pace of
something that can happen in a short period of time.
These are all
pretty ambitious, but what if you’re making a short on a budget? Or this is
your first attempt at making a short film ever?
Look no further
than the Duplass brothers amazing short, This Is John, to
prove that you don’t need expensive set pieces or VFX to create a compelling
story.
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As you can see,
it’s not about the budget, it’s about what the audience takes away.
Now, outside of trying
to win awards, you may think devoting time to writing short films seems
fruitless, but right now, it’s one of the best ways to break into Hollywood.
So, How Can Writing
Short Films Help You Break in?
A great short film
is a wonderful way to get noticed as a director, but I stress GREAT. Not good,
not "well shot," but great.
You have to put all
the effort you can into your short film.
If you’re a
screenwriter, you may be able to use a short film as a sample, but likely not.
But writing a great short film can be an excellent calling card and get people
interested in reading your feature films.
Still, if you’re
just starting out, or trying to hone your voice on the page, writing a short
film is a great way to define your voice and master screenplay formatting.
Many believe
writing a great short film is harder than writing a feature. You have to be
able to master economy on the page, shorthand in storytelling, and know when to
start and end.
Those skills will
only come in handy more when you need to trim your 120-page script to 90.
Theoretically,
you’re reading this post because you want to have a short film that helps you
break into Hollywood.
Let's say for
argument's sake you have a GREAT short film. What then? People don't usually
buy short film scripts. First thing you want to do is you want to make your
short film. Maybe if you can't get a budget together you'll go the animated
short film route.
Then I'd put it
on Vimeo,
submit it to Short Film of The Week, or find a way for a
massive audience to see it.
That could mean
entering it in a festival, or just getting your friends and family to post it
all over the internet.
Either way, you
want people to find and see the short film.
Then, if you're
lucky, multiple people will see it and reach out to you.
Suddenly you might
have reps. Yay!
Why Else Would You
Consider Writing a Short Film?
Hollywood is making
less and less movies every year. Now they want to make sure they have proven
yourself and so has the material.
Writing a short
film is a great way to give any exec in town an appetizer portion of your
talent and your feature.
Recently, Damien
Chazelle directed a short film version of Whiplash to secure
funding for the feature film.
Hollywood wants to
know it’s betting on someone who can control the story. Having a great short
film will ease the worries of big financiers.
Most of Hollywood
is now obsessed with PROOF OF CONCEPT shorts. Those can be as small as
the Whiplash, one you just saw, or as large as a Neil Bloomkamp
movie.
If you want the
money to make District 9, you’re going to have to put a lot up
front.
Or find a unique
way to get your idea across.
Check out this
short film meant to entice studios to pay hundreds of millions of dollars on a
space adventure movie.
While it’s a little
thin on story, this short film gets the general concept and scope of the
feature film across.
It was big enough
for Fox to bite and purchase the idea.
This is the quality
people expect from things like this. Yes, they're often VERY EXPENSIVE.
When you spend that
much, you better make that much.
Too much pressure can
sink your short film idea.
Now, if you’re like
me and poor, you should focus on making something GREAT that's cheaper and more
indicative of what you’d do with a feature.
Hala, directed by Minhal Baig, was able to help her secure financing
for the feature-length version of this story. It also helped her get reps in
Hollywood.
She was able to
crowdsource the budget and get it in front of the right people.
There are many ways
in the Hollywood door.
As you can see,
there are a lot of different ways shorts help, but, as I mentioned, these short
films are all GREAT in their own way.
They carry their
stories and are indicative of the work these people can do as directors and
what you'll get if you hire them.
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